I really like the drawings! However the text seems to be cut in half because of the picture, so I would unify them. The amount of text is also a little distracting because I don't really know what war you are talking about. It also doesn't seem really urgent to me, more of a mellow and laid back poster that would be hung up on a wall to enjoy, not really to get someone to take action. So put the text in red or make the font more chaotic to make it seem more urgent. I do like the metallic look and the amazing depth you achieved with those three colors! Good job.
The images are a little blurred or smudged so it is difficult to see them. Some of the font seems to be running diagonally while some is straight. I feel that there is too much text going on above and below the image. The idea is very good and the images are nice as well, they just need to be clearer.
Wow this is pretty cool, I like the drawings a lot. My only problem is the font doesn't seem to fit the drawings in my opinion, and there is too much text. Keep up the good work though
Nice poster, I like the art style for your drawings. To me there are too many words which makes some parts of the poster cluttered. This kinda reminds me of the movie "Starship Troopers" propaganda. Overall great poster.
Nice poster. you did a nice job with your drawings! i like the color scheme for them. the whole concept of the poster makes me feel like i'm enlisting to be a space marine or something. maybe the text could've been better.
I love this, very sci-fi. I love your choice in colors and the sketchiness of the creatures. The things that bother me are that the boxes slant a lot and it looks weird compared to the top and bottom text and that the section of "Enlists" should have more spaces between them, so that they look like separate things instead of becoming one block of text.
This is very original and different. I like the drawings, but maybe they could be touched up a bit more because I can't really tell what they are. Good use of text, but the boxes of the text could straightened. The enlist part should be spaced a bit so it doesn't seem so meshed together. This was very good and I love sci-fi stuff and it gives a feel like you want to enlist.
I take this as a spoof on the Uncle Sam wants you poster. I think it’s great that you used your own drawings and learned how to manipulate and change them in photoshop and illustrator. I like what you tried-you really distorted them and gave them a celestial or more gritty feel. The colors are interesting and feel darkly atmospheric. As far as the bands of text go, I think the angles that you placed the text on are interesting and help the poster feel more urgent or dynamic. I think this could be played up even more...create more of an angle here. The very upper title “The Galactic Coalition Needs You” could even disrupt the boundaries, which would grab our attention more and make us think someone is calling this out at a high volume. Maybe the section below the figures could be slightly smaller, as it gives more detail. I would play around with the location of this text too. What if it was at the very bottom and the bottom texts “All roles needed, etc.” was above that and right underneath the figures?
This caught my attention right away! The imagery is interesting. If i could changing anything I'd try maybe increasing the angle on the gray bars to heighten that feeling of urgency.
I like the sketch artist style of the characters. Has a rugged and evil feel for it, as if i were looking at an alien 'Wanted' poster. I wish more information was provided as to what this was for. I like the tag line at the bottom. Pretty intense.
This poster is very unique! I believe there's too much text on your poster. Your hand-drawn characters should take center stage in your poster. The text is a little distracting.
Hmm....well this is interesting. I honestly don't know what to say about this. I mean I like the hand-drawn style. But the problem I have is that this feels so empty to me. Maybe if there was more style instead of more text, then I think it will look pretty good.
I really like the drawings! However the text seems to be cut in half because of the picture, so I would unify them. The amount of text is also a little distracting because I don't really know what war you are talking about. It also doesn't seem really urgent to me, more of a mellow and laid back poster that would be hung up on a wall to enjoy, not really to get someone to take action. So put the text in red or make the font more chaotic to make it seem more urgent. I do like the metallic look and the amazing depth you achieved with those three colors! Good job.
ReplyDeleteThe images are a little blurred or smudged so it is difficult to see them. Some of the font seems to be running diagonally while some is straight. I feel that there is too much text going on above and below the image. The idea is very good and the images are nice as well, they just need to be clearer.
ReplyDeleteWow this is pretty cool, I like the drawings a lot. My only problem is the font doesn't seem to fit the drawings in my opinion, and there is too much text. Keep up the good work though
ReplyDeleteNice poster, I like the art style for your drawings. To me there are too many words which makes some parts of the poster cluttered. This kinda reminds me of the movie "Starship Troopers" propaganda. Overall great poster.
ReplyDeleteNice poster. you did a nice job with your drawings! i like the color scheme for them. the whole concept of the poster makes me feel like i'm enlisting to be a space marine or something. maybe the text could've been better.
ReplyDeletenice job!
I LOVE the texture in your image.. It breaks up the clean cut text. I just don't understand all the text. Do you need it all?
ReplyDeleteI like the poster, but the lines around the text should have been straightened out. I love the drawing and the chaoticness shown by the smudges.
ReplyDeleteI love this, very sci-fi. I love your choice in colors and the sketchiness of the creatures. The things that bother me are that the boxes slant a lot and it looks weird compared to the top and bottom text and that the section of "Enlists" should have more spaces between them, so that they look like separate things instead of becoming one block of text.
ReplyDeleteThis is very original and different. I like the drawings, but maybe they could be touched up a bit more because I can't really tell what they are. Good use of text, but the boxes of the text could straightened. The enlist part should be spaced a bit so it doesn't seem so meshed together. This was very good and I love sci-fi stuff and it gives a feel like you want to enlist.
ReplyDeleteI take this as a spoof on the Uncle Sam wants you poster. I think it’s great that you used your own drawings and learned how to manipulate and change them in photoshop and illustrator. I like what you tried-you really distorted them and gave them a celestial or more gritty feel. The colors are interesting and feel darkly atmospheric. As far as the bands of text go, I think the angles that you placed the text on are interesting and help the poster feel more urgent or dynamic. I think this could be played up even more...create more of an angle here. The very upper title “The Galactic Coalition Needs You” could even disrupt the boundaries, which would grab our attention more and make us think someone is calling this out at a high volume. Maybe the section below the figures could be slightly smaller, as it gives more detail. I would play around with the location of this text too. What if it was at the very bottom and the bottom texts “All roles needed, etc.” was above that and right underneath the figures?
ReplyDeleteThis caught my attention right away! The imagery is interesting. If i could changing anything I'd try maybe increasing the angle on the gray bars to heighten that feeling of urgency.
ReplyDeleteI like the sketch artist style of the characters. Has a rugged and evil feel for it, as if i were looking at an alien 'Wanted' poster. I wish more information was provided as to what this was for. I like the tag line at the bottom. Pretty intense.
ReplyDeleteThis poster is very unique! I believe there's too much text on your poster. Your hand-drawn characters should take center stage in your poster. The text is a little distracting.
ReplyDeleteSeems nice. looks like poster. Actually I have no idea what do I have to feel.
ReplyDeleteOH my, well done! It's nice. looks like the whole thing was drawn. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteHmm....well this is interesting. I honestly don't know what to say about this. I mean I like the hand-drawn style. But the problem I have is that this feels so empty to me. Maybe if there was more style instead of more text, then I think it will look pretty good.
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